instead of a wall ....
If only I had built a path
instead of a darkened room ...
If only I had built an overlook
instead of a cavern ...
If only I would have lay the bricks differently ...
If only.
Mag 51 ....
The place I demolish my writers block!
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
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well done! No if's only here!
ReplyDeleteI think we all tend to consider the what if's.
ReplyDelete(you accidentally linked to last week's post...I'll fix it for you)
If only, something that troubles us all at times.
ReplyDeleteWhat if's are full of wisdom. Love your poem!
ReplyDeleteNice little piece. Now I'm getting on a bit, I'd love to know exactly how many 'if only's' I've said!
ReplyDeleteif only I know better...
ReplyDeletelove your take on this,
a blissful read.
I try to avoid the if only's as much as possible because they just tend to get me in trouble. Nice work here!
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