Monday, April 26, 2010

Quiet Passing ... The Baton ...


A thousand songs.
A million tapping feet.
A Band at his command.
Drummers drumming merrily.
His baton carried the rhythm.

He anticipated the clang of the cymbal
and the trill of the flute ...
Beneath his feet he felt the following
of a hundred musicians
all watching his baton.

And when at last he lowered it
that warm April morning,
the drummers stopped their drumming
and the band came to a halt and waited.

"I am old and tired," he spoke lowly,
"I can only hear the rhythm in my mind now."

No one moved. No one breathed.
All eyes were once again on the baton
as his elderly hands passed it on ...

and the drummers once again began to drum.



16 comments:

  1. ..... and life goes on.

    Very nice indeed.

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  2. We all have only so long in the spotlight don't we.

    Very well written!

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  3. The circle of life...sort of. And the old gives way to the new.

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  4. Sad and lovely. Well done!

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  5. that he knew his time and was willing to pass it on...i commend him. great magpie!

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  6. So many thought of death when viewing this prompt. Lynn, yours is one of the best.

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  7. How sweet this is - tender and touching!

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  9. A touching tale oh so sweet! We all get to "pass the baton" on to the next generation someday.

    Joanny

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  10. Knowing when to go..but we can still dream, can't we..
    really loved this..well done!

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  11. It happens to us all doesn't it? Nice writing!

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  12. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/magpie-tale-the-magical-wish/

    here is mine!

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  13. Dear Lynn: The baton passed to the next batallion Sargaent Major as the band played on...and on... keeping the music alive. I find this inspirationally uplifting to know how these rare talents are handed down to the next generation. Excellent poem! ps Love the music on your blog! Sunny Side of the Street!

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  14. Oh how lovely that is. What a beautiful story. I so enjoyed reading your poem.
    Blessings, Star

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  15. Touching poem. Sad but true, we all must move on and thankfully we can leave something beautiful if we try.

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